I liked this poem. Maybe even more than the first in the "rain series." first of all, there are very little, but well-chosen words. (I think i like your little poems a little more than the longer ones)...but anyway, so i will not digress. There are many emotions and feelings in these very short lines. I'm sure you will agree with me. There's happiness, sadness, youth, disappointment, rejuvenation, and hope...I liked this one.
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I liked this poem. Maybe even more than the first in the "rain series." first of all, there are very little, but well-chosen words. (I think i like your little poems a little more than the longer ones)...but anyway, so i will not digress. There are many emotions and feelings in these very short lines. I'm sure you will agree with me. There's happiness, sadness, youth, disappointment, rejuvenation, and hope...I liked this one.
Thanks for liking this one, it has its beauty in the drops that leave the stamping in the rain of joyful youth.
Om Namah Shivaya
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